tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post2329132982849310937..comments2023-12-03T22:02:52.782+00:00Comments on Always Another Chapter: The Bells of St BrigitLyssa Medanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-76855457764899289722014-02-12T00:00:21.077+00:002014-02-12T00:00:21.077+00:00So sad and beautifully written.So sad and beautifully written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-88580533609994466792014-02-09T09:11:00.580+00:002014-02-09T09:11:00.580+00:00I'm really glad you like it. I don't know...I'm really glad you like it. I don't know, something about the prompt called to me in verse. Thank you for commenting. Lyssa Medanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-30570009685104181432014-02-09T09:08:58.036+00:002014-02-09T09:08:58.036+00:00If you think that it is haunting, that is praise i...If you think that it is haunting, that is praise indeed! Thank you for commenting. LM xLyssa Medanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-37817045711797858032014-02-09T09:08:23.897+00:002014-02-09T09:08:23.897+00:00I'm glad you liked it. I was worried about do...I'm glad you liked it. I was worried about doing such a lovely prompt justice. Thank you for commenting. LM xLyssa Medanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-86497113939314234412014-02-09T09:02:53.249+00:002014-02-09T09:02:53.249+00:00I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you for c...I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you for commenting. LM xLyssa Medanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-67207182468195331252014-02-09T01:56:35.035+00:002014-02-09T01:56:35.035+00:00Way to rise to the challenge with the even tougher...Way to rise to the challenge with the even tougher challenge of structured poetry! Haunting images, Lyssa.Cameronhttp://camerondgarriepy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-18466512897878924042014-02-09T00:42:18.170+00:002014-02-09T00:42:18.170+00:00So haunting and so powerfully conveyed - I loved t...So haunting and so powerfully conveyed - I loved this.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-56412555459529390002014-02-08T23:02:28.299+00:002014-02-08T23:02:28.299+00:00This is beautiful. Such lovely imagery with each ...This is beautiful. Such lovely imagery with each word filled with meaning. Well done! ♥Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11564863484894692249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-88400388864721433492014-02-08T21:17:01.324+00:002014-02-08T21:17:01.324+00:00Lovely (and disturbing) images. The roses breathin...Lovely (and disturbing) images. The roses breathing, the waves hissing on sand, and a cold dead hand. Well done.Angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02662499515608431425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-20593418568568050762014-02-07T10:53:24.536+00:002014-02-07T10:53:24.536+00:00I'm glad you liked it. I just loved your imag...I'm glad you liked it. I just loved your imagery and the whole feel of your poem. Thank you for commenting. LM xLyssa Medanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-85758477566195751692014-02-07T05:41:54.124+00:002014-02-07T05:41:54.124+00:00Well done, very vivid imagery of loss... Cold and ...Well done, very vivid imagery of loss... Cold and empty and full of farewell... Thanks for stopping by mine (Asproulla) and the kind comment :)Asproullahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10495411522653521782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-8579148435189004142014-02-06T08:07:21.774+00:002014-02-06T08:07:21.774+00:00I'm really glad you like it - and glad that th...I'm really glad you like it - and glad that the punctuation looks okay. As for trouble, I take the view that at least I will have material for writing. Thank you for commenting. LM xLyssa Medanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-42302953704932515242014-02-06T08:06:16.980+00:002014-02-06T08:06:16.980+00:00Thank you for commenting. I am glad you liked the...Thank you for commenting. I am glad you liked the image, the sea can be a metaphor for so many things. LM xLyssa Medanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-32026219072757491652014-02-06T08:03:20.218+00:002014-02-06T08:03:20.218+00:00I am glad you like it. The sea can be very cruel....I am glad you like it. The sea can be very cruel. Thank you for commenting LM xLyssa Medanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-4079357097393415112014-02-06T02:58:54.482+00:002014-02-06T02:58:54.482+00:00What a beautiful poem. You chose perfect words for...What a beautiful poem. You chose perfect words for the mood and the mind pictures. I thought the puctuation worked...but I am not an expert. I hope whatever you are going through gets better quick!Terryhttp://www.writerlywannabe.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-73151477014368845612014-02-06T01:57:09.555+00:002014-02-06T01:57:09.555+00:00The line about the waves hissing onto the sand is ...The line about the waves hissing onto the sand is so telling. Normally water is a calming influence, but that descriptor told of the sadness to come.angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2594821826319629605.post-74165287897780559852014-02-06T00:21:51.960+00:002014-02-06T00:21:51.960+00:00So sad. The imagery of him slipping beneath the ic...So sad. The imagery of him slipping beneath the icy water is chilling. Well done.<br />Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.com