Saturday, 14 June 2014

Prove It!

I know I could have done a lot more with this prompt from Light and Shade Challenge, but I couldn't help hearing the rhythm of this, so here it is, the response to the quotation, 'Prove It'.

A warning bell rings in my ears
You do your best to soothe it
You tell me that you'd die for me
I turn and tell you, 'Prove it'.

6 comments:

  1. Perfect. Absolutely perfect

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  2. Every word perfect... nothing left unsaid.

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  3. Concisely precise.

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  4. Well! An interesting way of dealing with a persitant suitor of there ever was one.

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