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He
looked carefully at his outfit. He had
to get the look exactly right, it could make all the difference between success and failure. There was an all night screening of the
Twilight films and he could not miss this opportunity.
He was naturally pale but his blond hair was a
problem. The old fashioned top hat that
he had picked up on the internet should cover it and give the right feel. He had considered a cane but he hoped there
would be times in the evening when he wanted both hands free. There were likely to be a lot of young ladies
at the screening.
The
suit had been a problem. He had found
one eventually in a second hand shop.
The black suit jacket had velvet lapels and the waistcoat was nicely
cut. He had been meticulous to get rid
of any faint trace of the iridescent dusting powder. With the slightly flared trousers it said
very clearly that this was a man who had not quite got the decade right.
He
had wondered about the shirt. He may
have wanted to look as if he couldn't keep up with fashion after all this time,
but there was no way he was wearing 1970s drip dry polyester with a frill. He had settled for a deep crimson silk
shirt. It was brand new, but silk was an
old fashioned material and he could always say that he had ripped his favourite
brushed nylon shirt in a fight with a werewolf.
With well polished shoes and a heavy, plain signet ring he should look
the part.
He
checked he had his ticket and plenty of cash.
He didn't want to break the look with a credit card and if he got lucky
with a persuadable lady he didn't want to give too much information about
himself, just in case. The taxi outside
sounded the horn.
"Going
to the screening? You look just like a
vampire, mate. It makes a better night
if you put a bit of effort in to look the part." The taxi driver sighed. "I used to have a suit like that forty
years ago. Of course, I was a lot
thinner then. Well, you won't be lonely
tonight, I bet you've got a hotel room booked."
He
smiled enigmatically and gave the driver a generous tip. Looking at the crowd there were others who
had aimed for his intended look but he prided himself that he had hit closest
to the mark. He was already getting
interested glances and he thought it would not take much to entice the pretty
brunette near the popcorn stand to a secluded corner to 'talk'.
Carefully
keeping his expression immobile, inside he was laughing wildly. He may be seven hundred and thirty two years
old and a vampire but looking at all those pliable, gullible necks made him
feel like a child in a sweet shop.
I've never really got into the Twilight series, but I can't help feel that vampires are not very nice. This is my take on a baddie.
Brilliant stuff - the idea of a vampire posing (badly) as a vampire is irresistible.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you liked it Thanks for commenting LM x
DeleteVery clever, well done.
ReplyDeleteI'm really glad you liked it, thank you for commenting. I am sure I am doing Twilight a disservice. LM x
DeleteGreat original twist on the vampire theme! Great built up to the twist
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed
Ally :)
I'm really glad you liked it, and I'm really glad that you liked the twist. Thank you for commenting.
DeleteVery sly of you..well done
ReplyDeleteThank you. It was a lot of fun (and I am sure I am not being fair to Twilight) Lyssa M x
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